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Do you think it's an A?
yes, that's fantastic
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almost, there are a few changes you could make
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PostPosted: Sat Dec 09, 2006 7:37 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

How about something like....The plaque on the door reads simply, 'Solitude'. This is my place of refuge so stay OUT!!!

just a suggestion. Laughing
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PostPosted: Sat Dec 09, 2006 7:39 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Laughing if i say it my way it'd be more like....

this is my room, stay the F**k out.

but that wouldn't fly with Mrs. Crane. Laughing
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PostPosted: Sat Dec 09, 2006 7:45 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

How about....something like: the wonderful thing about Solitude is, the door is always locked....

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PostPosted: Sat Dec 09, 2006 7:54 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Embarassed rosie....I'm shocked! Laughing Hey, hand over some of those gummy bears, I need some giggly feelings too.

good suggestion Ivonne, except that I don't think it should be about the door being locked so much as a request to respect her privacy....how would you word that? What about 'the plaque on the door says simply..."Solitude", that means stay the hell out of my room. Can you say hell or would you get busted for that rosie?
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PostPosted: Sat Dec 09, 2006 7:56 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

ok, now I know I need to get some sleep, I replied to Ivonne and it wasn't her I was replying to. And no rosie, you can't pop my bubble wrap it would make my head explode. Laughing Laughing
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PostPosted: Sat Dec 09, 2006 7:59 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Laughing ur sooo cute when u get all confused and stuff.... Laughing

it's not gummy bears....it's reeses peanutbutter cups...yum....one of my favs.... Laughing here u go *throws a handful at u*
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PostPosted: Sat Dec 09, 2006 8:04 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

hey...wut were u blushing for anyway?
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PostPosted: Sat Dec 09, 2006 8:09 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

yeah, something you might say to your brother would very much work...


the story is awesome... I'm much much impressed... It was an A before, but now it beats that Brett kid for sure...

(unless his real name is Stephen King, I think I'm safe to say you're better than him)

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PostPosted: Sat Dec 09, 2006 8:11 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Laughing i got the ending....

The plaque says Solitude for a reason. You’re not invited in so stay out.
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